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PostSubject: My FanFic   Thu Jul 31, 2008 4:12 pm

Im going to start a Menudo story and i wanted to know if any of you guys wanted to be in it Smile
Oh and im gonna be with Carlos Wink
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PostSubject: Re: My FanFic   Thu Jul 31, 2008 7:36 pm

sure i wouldn't mine.
I'll be with Chris if you want...

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PostSubject: Re: My FanFic   Thu Jul 31, 2008 8:25 pm

Oh!!! Cool. I would love to be in your fan fiction. Can I be with Monti? Can't wait!

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PostSubject: Re: My FanFic   Thu Jul 31, 2008 8:31 pm

Can I been in it :]
I want to be with Jose Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: My FanFic   Fri Aug 01, 2008 12:37 am

ok.....it may be a while before i start but yea all of you guys can be in it!
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oh and does ANYONE want to "co-write"?
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PostSubject: Re: My FanFic   Fri Aug 01, 2008 9:48 am

I don't mind co writing it with you! XD I think that will be cool.

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PostSubject: Re: My FanFic   Fri Aug 01, 2008 4:59 pm

whoo hoo!
lol
okie dokie!
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u wanna start ot me?
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PostSubject: Re: My FanFic   Fri Aug 01, 2008 10:16 pm

Well you can start first because i don't know how you want the story to go.

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PostSubject: Re: My FanFic   Sat Aug 02, 2008 1:01 am

ok well..........it might be a while cuz i have to write for another story but as soon as i get dont with that, i will start!

oh mikelana!
do u have any ideas for the story before i start?
cuz if so tell me cuz im kinda stuck Razz
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and if you do PM them becuz we dont wanna spoil the surprise!
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PostSubject: Re: My FanFic   Sat Aug 02, 2008 5:14 pm

I'll definitely think about some ideas and run them by you! Smile

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PostSubject: Re: My FanFic   Sat Aug 02, 2008 9:26 pm

okie dokie!
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yea i need ur ideas OR ANYONE ELSES becuz idk what to write about, i have an idea but its WAY boring so yea lol
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PostSubject: Re: My FanFic   Mon Aug 04, 2008 12:31 am

oh and jeca im adding you to the story!
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PostSubject: Re: My FanFic   Mon Aug 04, 2008 12:53 pm

c0me 0n syd,
write write write
lma0
jk
take y0ur time :]]


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PostSubject: Re: My FanFic   Mon Aug 04, 2008 3:25 pm

im almost done i just gotta revise it and stuff lol
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PostSubject: Re: My FanFic   Mon Aug 04, 2008 5:55 pm

menudo_lover08 wrote:
oh and jeca im adding you to the story!
Razz
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lol i was fine wit just readin the story
cant wait for the add
thanks for adding me to the story
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PostSubject: Re: My FanFic   Mon Aug 04, 2008 9:01 pm

haha
well i was like ima add jeca even if she dont wanna be in it!
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ur welcome!
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PostSubject: Re: My FanFic   Tue Aug 05, 2008 1:50 pm

A Menudo story……………..

It all started back in high school. Syd, Chelita, Jeca, Andi, and Mikelana were best friends. When they got done with H.S, they all bought a house together. One night they went to a club and met a guy named Monti. They all became friends. Then Monti decided to try out for Menudo. He made it and the girls hardly ever got to see him. When they got back from tour, they decided to meet up with the girls. And this is how it began………

Syd- Yea sure Monti! Where ya’ll wanna go?
Monti- I say we go to that new club they made like a month ago!
Syd- Sounds cool. Hey before that, come to our house! So we can catch up on things!
Monti- haha alright! See you guys later!
Syd- Love ya!
Monti- Love you too!
Chris- Who you telling “I love you too!”?
Carlos- Man….u didn’t tell me u had a girl!
Monti- I don’t! They are just a bunch of my friends.
Carlos- Are they fine friends?
Monti- haha Yea…
Chris- Well then……we are going with you!
Monti- Alright but u guys better not try to play shyt cuz they are like my sisters!
Carlos- Well I cant promise that…..
Monti- haha

8:00 that night.

Syd- Jeca!
Jeca- Wut?!
Syd- Help me with my hair!
Jeca- OMG! Im coming!
Chelita- Ima call Monti! *just then the doorbell rang*
Chelita- I’ll get it!
Andi- Mikelana! Where did u put my shirt?
Mikelana- I don’t remember!
Chelita- MONTI!!!!
Monti- Hey girl!
Jose- Hey! *giving chelita a hug*
Chelita- do I know you?
Jose- No……*whispering in chris’s ear* She’s mine.
Carlos- haha
Chelita- Monti my boy how u been?!
Syd- *running to Monti and juming on him* MY BRO! *monti swings her around*
Monti- Hey Syd! Whats up?!
Syd- Boy….i missed you so much!
Carlos- Shes mine!
Syd- Excuse me?
Carlos- Oh did I say that outloud?
Syd- haha yea…*blushes*
Carlos- My bad…..Smile
Jeca- Monti boy!
Monti- Hola!
Jeca- hehe hey…
Mikelana- WUTS UP!!!!!
Monti- OMG! GURL I MISSED YOU THE MOST!!
Mikelana- Yea…….me too.
*akward silence*
Syd- So…..whos ready to go get their dance on?!
Everyone- Ok Ok lets go…..lol
Syd- So whos riding with who?
Carlos- Well I brought my car so if anyone wants to ride with me they can….
Chris- I’ll ride with you Carlos!
Carlos- No you fool! I meant the girls *looks at Syd*
Syd- haha I would be honored.
Carlos- Well then… I guess shes ridin with me.
Chris- Well ima have to ride with someone else cuz my car is low on gas.
Miki- Well I have my car, so if anyone wants to ride with me they can.
Andi- *walking out of the house* Okay Im done!
Chris- 0_0
Andi- What?
Chris- Oh nothing…..umm…….do u have a car?
Andi- Yea…???
Chris- Oh umm……well, well umm can I ride with you?
Andi- Yea…lol come on.
Chelita- Monti wanna ride with me?
Monti- Yea…
Chelita- Well the rest of ya’ll can ride with me if ya’ll want!?
Jose- Sounds good.
Chelita- *blushes*
Jose- *smiles* Whats your name again?
Chelita- Its Christina but everyone calls me Chelita.
Jose- Christina? That’s a pretty name.
Chelita- haha Thank you. *blushes*

Everyone got in the cars. Syd rode with Carlos. Andi rode with Chris. Jose, Chelita, Jeca, Emma, Monti, and Mikelana rode together. Everyone got to talking in the car. Eveyone got to know each other.

W/ Chelita, Jose, Mikelana, and Monti

Monti- So girls, any of you got boyfriends?
Chelita- Monti, you know me and my last boyfriend didn’t go to well….
Monti- Yea. I hated him!
Jose- What happened?
Chelita- Well, he kinda cheated on me.
Jose- Oh really? I’m sorry really sorry bout that.
Chelita- Oh don’t be sorry. Well I know I wont be having any boyfriends soon.
Jose- Oh….we might have to change that *softly smiles at Chelita*
Chelita- Oh…..haha Yeah we might.
Monti- Anyways…..Mikelana have you had any boyfriends?
Mikelana- No….I told you I’d wait for you.
Monti- Yeah I know but it’s kinda hard to believe someone as cute as you couldn’t have a boyfriend.
Mikelana- haha Thank you for the compliment.
Monti- Your welcome. *smiles*
Mikelana- *leaning in to give Monti a kiss*
Chelita- So Miki! Are you gonna drink?
Mikelana- *stopping and looking at Chelita* Oh…….yea why?
Chelita- Because you might have to drive home!
Mikelana- LMAO!
Emma- Well I plan on coming home with a girl so you guys better stay somewhere else.
Monti- Man you should stay somewhere else!
Chelita- Don’t worry! You guys cans stay at our house!
Jose- Serious?
Chelita- Yea. We have two extra bedrooms!
Monti- I aint sleeping on the floor! So I call a bed.
Jose- Well I guess I could sleep on the floor.
Chelita- Umm……Jose if you want you could sleep in my room. I have an extra bed in my room.
Jose- Ok….Ima sleep in your room then.
Chelita- haha Yea….
Monti- Jose you better not be stupid with Chelita.
Chelita and Jose- MONTI!!!!


w/ Carlos and Syd

Carlos- So how old are you?
Syd- Me? I just turned 21.
Carlos- Really? Im 22.
Syd- Cool…..so you gonna buy me a drink?
Carlos- haha Yea…..you gonna dance with me?
Syd- Can you dance?
Carlos- Im the king of dance girl!
Syd- Well I might dance with you…
Carlos- Might?
Syd- Hopefully we wont have time to dance…
Carlos- haha Yea HOPEFULLY!
Syd- I thought u’d have a girlfriend!
Carlos- naw…..girls seem to be intimidated.
Syd- WHAT?!
Carlos- Yea they never even try to talk to me….
Syd- They don’t know what they are missing out on!
Carlos- haha So whats your boyfriends name?
Syd- I don’t have a boyfriend.
Carlos- YOU DON’T???? Come on… I find that hard to believe.
Syd- I had a boyfriend, but he thought I was cheating on him so he cheated on me.
Carlos- Were you cheating?
Syd- No!
Carlos- Oh my bad! Lol
Syd- haha

Carlos and Syd kept talking and laughing the whole way to the club. When everyone got there, they went to get drinks, and then walked up to the V.I.P. section. Everyone sat down and chilled.

Jeca- OMG! I love this song!
Emma- Wanna go dance?
Jeca- Yea sure!
Emma- Ok guys. I’ll be right back!
Carlos- Hey Cheli wanna go dance?
Cheli- Yea.
Jose- Well sorry Carlos she’s dancing with me! So go away!
Carlos- I know! I just wanted to see what you were gonna do! LMAO!
Cheli- lol Come on Jose!
Jose- Ok *taking a last sip of his drink*
Carlos- So Syd you wanna go dance?
Syd- Yea sure.
Carlos- And I am taking you no one else! Haha
Chris- OK Carlos we get the point! Lol
Carlos-haha Come on Syd *grabs her hand*

They started dancing and then the song “Move” came on. Carlos said, “ What! They playing are song!” Then after that the DJ said, “We got the boys from Menudo in the house!” and then the boys went on stage to dance for the crowd, leaving Syd and Chelita standing beside the stage. During the song, Jose and Carlos went to grab Syd and Chelita. Chelita and Syd were kinda embarrassed but they dance with the guys. Carlos grabbed Syd’s hip and pulled her to him and looked her in the eyes. Before Syd could ask him what he was doing, he kissed her. Syd didn’t know what to do. She looked at him, and ran off the stage. Carlos looked at Chelita and asked her, “ I thought…..” Chelita interrupted him saying, “Its fine Carlos! She just came out of a bad relationship so shes not ready for another one.” Carlos replyed, “Should I go talk to her?” Chelita answered him saying, “I will.”
Chelita looked at Jose and smiled and he smiled back at her. Then she walked outside and found Syd sitting on the hood of Carlos’ car. Chelita walked over to her.

Chelita- You ok?
Syd- Yea…
Chelita- What made you walk out like that? Carlos is a good guy!
Syd- You don’t know him!
Chelita- Syd, ou heard Monti saying he’s a cool guy and he’s like a brother to all the guys.
Syd- Yea but I thought that about Miguel and look what he did to me!
Chelita- Don’t let Miguel’s mistakes mess this up!
Syd- I loved Miguel!
Chelita- And look what he did to you! Come on Syd….don’t let Miguel’s cheating get in the way of someone who really likes you for who you are!
Syd- I want to let that go but its so ahrd to forget someone rip out ur heart! *crying harder*
Chelita- I know Syd. *hugs her* Look, go talk to Carlos.
Syd- I cant talk to him now.
Chelita- Yea you can. He will understand.
Syd- I guess your right….
Chelita- haha Come on.

The girls go inside and walk up to the V.I.P section. Carlos and Jose were talking to each other. When they saw the girls walk up, Carlos looked down at the ground. Jose walked over to Chelita and they sat down and talked. Syd looked back at Chelita and she nodded her head, telling Syd to go talk to him.
Syd looked at Carlos and he looked down again. Syd felt mad at herself for embarrassing Carlos like that. She walked over to Carlos.

Syd- Can I sit down?
Carlos- Yea.
Syd- Im sorry for embarrassing you like that.
Carlos- I understand. Its my fault, I shouldn’t have did that.
Syd- No it’s not your fault! Im just kinda still hurting from what my ex did to me.
Carlos- I wont be like your ex! I will take care of you and I will never hurt you!
Syd- *crying* Miguel said the same thing.
Carlos- Syd. Im not Miguel.
Syd- *crying harder* I know that Carlos!
Carlos- *hugging Syd* Syd. *wipes her tears*
Syd- Carlos…..
Carlos- Believe me.
Syd- I do.
Carlos- Here, I will go get us some drinks. What kind you want?
Syd- I want a strawberry margarita =]]
Carlos- haha Ok……I’ll be right back. *walks to the bar*
Chelita- Syd…u ok now?
Syd- Yea I think.
Chelita- What he say?
Syd- He said that he’s not Miguel and that he’d treat me right.
Chelita- See gurl! Don’t stress!
Syd- I wont.
Chelita- Where’d he go?
Syd- He went to go get us some drinks
Chelita- And he didn’t ask me if I wanted one! Lol JK
Syd- haha Sshh! Here he comes!
Carlos- What ya’ll laughing about?
Syd- haha None of your business!
Carlos- Oh I see how it is!
Syd-haha Yea.
Carlos- Nice to see you smiling again!
Syd- Yea thanks to Chelita!
Carlos- Oh haha

They all stayed for a while and then decided to leave. The guys all stayed at the girls house. Carlos slept in Syd’s room and Jose slept in Chelita’s room. The rest of the guys either slept on the couch or in the guest rooms. The next morning, Jose made breakfast for Chelita. He sat by her bed and waited ‘till she woke up. Carlos sat beside Syd on her bed and he woke her up with a kiss. They stayed in Syd’s room and Chelita accidentally walked in on them kissing. They both stopped and looked at Chelita. Chelita laughed and walked out. Carlos looked at Syd and smiled. Syd said, “Doesn’t anyone know how to knock?” And Carlos said, “ Well….we have nothing to hide!”


AND THERE'S THE FIRST CHAPTER! HOPE YOU GUYS LIKE IT! Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: My FanFic   Tue Aug 05, 2008 4:09 pm

aww...! This is a really cute chapter! Monti must be a pimp to have that many "girl" friends. I can't wait for more! Did you want me to continue?

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PostSubject: Re: My FanFic   Tue Aug 05, 2008 4:20 pm

haha this is so cute!! Wow! I need more!!

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PostSubject: Re: My FanFic   Tue Aug 05, 2008 4:22 pm

LMAO!
thank you lol
haha
yea i wanted there to be a reason we knew the guys so i just picked him lol

oh and if you want to continue, you can cuz i would love to see ur ideas!
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PostSubject: Re: My FanFic   Tue Aug 05, 2008 5:23 pm

that was good
i loved it
write more soon
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PostSubject: Re: My FanFic   Tue Aug 05, 2008 5:26 pm

ima starting the next chapter right now, but the next one is where anyone who wants to write can! Smile
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PostSubject: Re: My FanFic   Tue Aug 05, 2008 5:45 pm

ok cant wait
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PostSubject: Re: My FanFic   Tue Aug 05, 2008 6:26 pm

Awesome! I truly can't wait for what is in store! XD

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PostSubject: Re: My FanFic   Tue Aug 05, 2008 9:04 pm

ohh can't wait!!!

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PostSubject: Re: My FanFic   Wed Aug 06, 2008 1:25 am

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Carlos and Syd sat in the room for a while and then decided to go to the kitchen. Carlos looked around the corner to see if Monti was still asleep and since he was Carlos decided to wake him. Carlos walked in Monti’s room and started jumping on his bed. Monti saw Carlos and threw a pillow at him. Carlos and Monti started a big pillow fight. They woke up Chris and Emma and they joined the pillow fight. Then Jose ran to go join. They didn’t know the girls were watching. Syd, Jeca,Chelita, Miki, and Andi stood at the door laughing but they kinda wanted to join. So they ran and got pillows and started hitting the guys. Chelita hit Chris in the face and Chris hit Jeca. Syd hit Jose and he hit her back. Carlos hit Jose for hitting Syd and Chelita hit Carlos for hitting Jose. Jeca hit Monti and Monti hit Mikelana. Mikelana hit Andi and Andi hit Syd. [You get the Point lol]

Carlos- Whoo! Is it hot in here or is it me?
Jose- It’s you! Lol Just kidding, It is hot!
Jeca- I’ll go turn the A.C on crybabys!
Chris- Im hungry!
Monti- Aren’t you always?
Everyone- haha
Chris- Man why you guys always pick on me!?
Andi- Aww Chris! I wont pick on you! *puts her arm around his shoulders*
Chris- Aww… Thank you! 
Carlos- Speaking of hungry, Syd you wanna go get a bite to eat?
Syd- Oh umm….yea sure!
Carlos- Ok Ima go get ready and then we can leave!
Chelita- Well, since they wanna be alone, we can all go somewhere else.
Syd- Oh Cheli Im sorry!
Chelita- haha Im not mad! Im actually kinda excited for you!
Syd- Oh lol
Jose- You kids better not be bad!
Carlos- Im not making any promises!
Jose- You got a nasty mind Carlos!
Carlos- haha Yep that’s me!
Syd- Boy, don’t scare me away!
Carlos- lol No ur the last thing I’d want to run away! If you left I’d have no one to…
Chelita- Carlos!
Jose- Lets leave these two alone!
Carlos- I’d like that!
Jose- Carlos dang don’t get urself excited over there!
Carlos- LOL!
Chelita- Come on guys lets go eat!
Jose- Ok. Haha Bye Carlito.
Carlos- Bye you guys!
Chelita- Syd Call me later!
Syd- Alright! See you guys later!

The rest of the guys left and they went to Mickey D’s to get something to eat. Carlos and Syd stayed at the house for a while just talking and watching T.V. After a while, Carlos gave Syd a kiss. Then they started to practically make-out. Before they knew it, they were doing something they shouldn’t have done. They went to Syd’s room and things got carried away. They both felt that they shouldn’t be doing this but they got caught in the moment. They carried on for a while and then they heard people walking around in the house.

Syd- THEIR BACK!
Carlos- OMG! Put ur clothes back on and I’ll hold the door!
Syd- *getting dressed* Ok Ok!
Chelita- Knock Knock!
Syd- Oh umm……hang on a sec!
Chelita- Why you holding the door?
Syd- Oh umm…….im busy!
Carlos- haha We were to seconds ago! *laughing*
Chelita- What you say Syd?
Syd- Nuthing *throwing a pillow at Carlos*
Chelita- Ok well hurry up and come out! I got something for you!
Syd- be right there!

Chelita walked away from the door and went to the living room with the rest of the guys. Carlos and Syd stayed in the room trying to figure out a way to make it look like they weren’t doing anything.

Carlos- They gonna find out!
Syd- No they wont! We can just say we were watching T.V in here and we made a mess so we didn’t want them to see 
Carlos- Ok. But I don’t think they gonna believe that!
Syd- Yea they will!

They walked out to the living room with everyone else.

Carlos- Hey you guys! Did you have fun?
Jose- Yea we went to the mall and shopped for a while! Did you guys have fun?
Syd- *looked at Carlos* Yea I guess you could say that.
Chelita- Carlos, why is your shirt on backwards?
Carlos- *looking down at his shirt* Oh……umm
Syd- I made him turn it inside out because I didn’t want it to get dirty!
Chelita- Why would it get dirty?
Carlos- Because I was eating a burger and it had a lot of grease and she didn’t want me to get grease on it!
Chelita- oh………ok ??? Anyways Syd I bought u this top!
Syd- Oh thanks! That’s really cute!
Chelita- Ur Welcome! I thought you might like it.
Syd- I do! You have great style Chelita!
Chelita- haha Thank you!  So what you guys do while we were gone?
Carlos- haha I think that’s between me and Syd.
Chelita- Why you say that?
Syd- Oh umm………
Chelita- You guys didn’t *pointing at the two of them*
Syd- What?
Chelita- Please tell me you guys didn’t hook up?!
Syd- No!
Jose- Carlos!
Carlos- We didn’t do anything!
Jose- Carlos, you know you are the worst liar ever right?
Syd- We didn’t do anything!
Chelita- Ok! Calm down you two!
Carlos- We just watched some T.V and played some games…..video games.
Syd- Yea

Everyone stayed in the living room talking and then they went their separate ways. Jose, Chelita, Carlos, and Syd went to the store to get groceries and stuff for the house. The rest stayed at the house and just hanged around.

At the store with Chelita and Syd

Chelita- Syd, what did you guys really do while we were gone?
Syd- Nothing!
Chelita- Syd, I know when your lying to me!
Syd- Ok….we did hook up.
Chelita- No way!
Syd- I Know! I just got kinda carried away and he is so hot!
Chelita- Syd! Calm down! I know what your going through!
Syd- Please don’t tell anyone!
Chelita- Girl I wont!
Syd- Ok.
Chelita- So I have to ask. Does he have a hot body?
Syd- CHELITA!
Chelita- What?! I wanna know!
Syd- Ok well……..lets just say im not gonna regret it!
Chelita- NAW!
Syd- Yeah.
Carlos- *grabbing syd from behind* What ya’ll talking bout?
Syd- Nothing.
Carlos- Can we be alone for a sec Cheli?
Cheli- Yea. Where’s Jose?
Carlos- In aisle 8.
Cheli- *laughing* Ok Thanx
Carlos- *waiting until Cheli left* So what’s up sexy?
Syd- *laughing* Nothing!
Carlos- So did you enjoy it?
Syd- Carlito!
Carlos- What! I wanna know!
Syd- Yea.
Carlos- Really?
Syd- Did you?
Carlos- Yea *biting his lip*
Syd- haha *kissing him*
Carlos- Well maybe me can do that again some time!
Syd- haha Yea.
Syd- Look Carlos, we dont know each other that well and i think we should take things slow.
Carlos- Well i think we already messsed that up.
Syd- Carlos you know what i mean!
Carlos- Yea i get you.
Syd- maybe we should just start out as friends and progress from there.
Carlos- just friends?
Syd- Yea.
Carlos- Syd, i like you alot and i wanna be more than just friends!
Syd- I like you alot too but we dont even know each other that well!
Carlos- Well we got to know each other alot today...
Syd- Can you be serious for a second Carlito?
Carlos- yes.....
Syd- maybe we can be boyfriend and girlfriend in a couple of days but for the next couple of days, i think we should get to know each other better.
Carlos- Ok well tonight, me and you are gonna talk talk talk.
Syd- sounds good.
Carlos- maybe even kiss Smile
Syd- Im serious!
Carlos- Im kidding!
Syd- So you staying in my room tonight?
Carlos- DUH!
Syd- Ok but i think we should go somewhere else to talk.
Carlos- Lets go to the beach and talk!
Syd- Ok *softly smiles*
Carlos- *almost kisses her but she pushes him away*
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PostSubject: Re: My FanFic   Wed Aug 06, 2008 12:06 pm

aww... that's cute! Carlos and Syd... naughty two... can't wait for more!!!

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PostSubject: Re: My FanFic   Wed Aug 06, 2008 1:18 pm

LMAO!
i had to add some drama!
lol
hey mikelana!
u wanna write the next chapter???
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PostSubject: Re: My FanFic   Wed Aug 06, 2008 1:39 pm

sure! I'll continue it! XD

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PostSubject: Re: My FanFic   Wed Aug 06, 2008 1:48 pm

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PostSubject: Re: My FanFic   Wed Aug 06, 2008 3:57 pm

This is awesome !! I need more please!!!

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PostSubject: Re: My FanFic   Wed Aug 06, 2008 4:48 pm

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PostSubject: Re: My FanFic   Wed Aug 06, 2008 6:48 pm

lol at carlos and syd
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PostSubject: Re: My FanFic   Wed Aug 06, 2008 8:43 pm

Everyone but Carlos and Syd were in the living room chattering away while playing scene it.
Mikelana rested on Monti’s shoulder while taking turns with the remote. Since there were only four remotes, Chris and Andi, Jose and Chelita, Jeca and Emma were in teams.
“ I wonder what is up with Carlos and Syd.” Andi spoke as the third round ended.
“Yah, probably relationship stuff, but ignore them.” Jose added while in deep concentration. Suddenly out of no where Chris shouted, “It’s A.” He kept yelling out the answers which made Mikelana ferious because it wasn’t fair. There was no competition. “Shut up Chris! Why are you telling everyone the answer!” Miki finally bursted. “It’s not the right answer.” Monti said, but Mikelana thought he was bluffing to calm her down. However, Mikelana clicked A thinking it was right and then it turned out he was wrong.
“Hey! What the heck?!” Miki said getting annoyed.
“ I didn’t tell you to listen to me.” Chris laughed. Miki just rolled her eyes and walked off. “Where are you going?” Monti spoke. Everyone broke their focus from the game to see what was going on. “Well… I’m just going to the beach.” She answered. “We’ll come with you, it’s boring sitting here anyway.” Chelita added.
Mikelana smiled and nodded her head, but gave Chris an annoying squint.
They all changed into their beach cloths and set off to the beach.
“ So, Monti, when are you going to ask Mikelana out?” Chelita walked next to Monti while the rest walked up front. “ I don’t think I will, because every time I show her that I miss her the most or I have feelings more then anything towards her, it seems like she doesn’t get it, or if she does she doesn’t want to feel it.” He spoke.
“But, you’ve been best friends with her for so long. With all of us.” Chelita admitted. “ I know, but it’s not that easy. With you, Andi, Jeca and Syd, it’s easy to be close to. Even Miki, but I don’t think she wants to break the friendship.”
“Have you even told her you felt that way towards her for a while?” She asked, hoping he would answer the question probably.” “ Uh… well, I did tell her I missed …” He tried to say but Chelita stopped him with the stare. “ Okay… no I haven’t. “ he confessed.
“ Tell her… or you’ll regret it. “ Chelita demanded. “It’s not the right time yet. But I will.” Monti said.
“Hey, what are you two talking about?” Miki stumbled while she left Jose to Chelita after they finished talking.
“Oh nothing, just life.” Monti lied. Mikelana felt close to Monti like they were brothers and sisters, so she gave him a hug and wrapped her arm around his waist as they walked.

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PostSubject: Re: My FanFic   Wed Aug 06, 2008 8:43 pm

Sorry it looks short, but I'm used to writing in paragraph format. I didn't know where to go with it, so I hope it was okay.... :'(

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PostSubject: Re: My FanFic   Wed Aug 06, 2008 9:05 pm

That was good! Short but its alright! lol

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PostSubject: Re: My FanFic   Wed Aug 06, 2008 10:19 pm

it may be short but it was good Smile
anyone else want to write??
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PostSubject: Re: My FanFic   Wed Aug 06, 2008 10:36 pm

That was awesome Mikelana :]
& who care if it was short or not
either way it was great..


well Syd :]
I give it a shot ;/ scratch
if i can?

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PostSubject: Re: My FanFic   Wed Aug 06, 2008 10:38 pm

hehe
yea what she said miki! ^_^

chelita if you want you can :/
if you dont wanna i can........
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PostSubject: Re: My FanFic   Thu Aug 07, 2008 5:55 pm

doesnt matter that it was short
i liked it
monti should listen to chelita
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PostSubject: Re: My FanFic   Thu Aug 07, 2008 6:41 pm

menudo_lover08 wrote:
hehe
yea what she said miki! ^_^

chelita if you want you can :/
if you dont wanna i can........

Did y0u just steal my smilie?
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just ay no se que escrivir
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PostSubject: Re: My FanFic   Sat Aug 09, 2008 5:36 pm

Sydney(Syd) & Carlos
Andi & Chris
Mikelana(Miki) & Monti
Christina(Chelita) & Jose
Jeca & Emma [I'm guessing] :\


They all when to the beach and quickly as soon as they got there Jose ran into the water yelling for everyone to join in. Everyone followed except for Monti & Miki they where last ones to get there.

Monti-You going in?
Miki-umm no I think I"m just gonna stay here in the sun I need a tan.
Monti then said in a mocking tone, "Oh yes I need a tan, I look horrible look at this." he said pointing at his face, and arms.
Miki raced an an eyebrow and question his words, "Are you mocking me?"
Monti- [Surprised] what me oh god never girl.
Miki- >_< I think y0u are.
Monti just smiled at her comments and then gave her this suspicious stare Suspect that she knew to well.
Miki-What are you thinking?
Monti- [Very Happy]
Miki-Noo... don't even think about it..
Monti-To late, He picked her up and ran with her into the waves as she yelled for him to put her down.

Chris-ohhh Someone is dead!
Jose-who?
Emma-Who do you think?
Jose looked around and then said, "Me? what did I do?"
Chelita-no dummy Monti look what he did to Miki she's gonna get mad.
Andi-Well they don't seem like there having a fight..

They all turned to see them and noticed Monti and Miki playing in the water like a couple of kids.

Emma-he got lucky.
Jeca-yeah that must have been it Wink
Chelita- jaja yeah

They continued to play around in the water till late that night when they began to get hungry and decided to go get a bite to eat.

They when to the nearest Taco Bell they saw.

Chelita-I'm starving.
Jose-That makes two of us. Smile
Chris-make that 3 ..
Jeca-I think we're all hungry.
Miki-hey where is Syd & Carlos they disappear this morning.
Chelita-Umm I think they had something to talk about or something.
Monti being the older brother he was to all the girls got protective and said, "Talk about what? What's going on between them?" he said mainly looking at Chelita.

Chelita's Point of View.

Why he have to come and ask me I got nothing to do with what's going on. I can't stand Monti's stare though he always gets the truth out of me.

"I'm waiting." said Monti.
Chelita-For what?
Monti-Whats going on between Carlos and Syd.
I shrugged my shoulders and said, "I don't know ask her."
Monti-You know something.
Jose-Leave alone man.
Monti-stay of this you don't get it.
Emma-what is there to get Syd, & Carlos are together let them be.
Monti-naw I won't Syd is like my sister she's been threw a lot I ain't about to let her go threw pain again.
Jeca-but Carlos is you friend he wouldn't be trying to hurt her would he?
Monti-I don't know.
Chelita-[sigh] well you want to find out what's up ask her not me.
Monti-she won't tell me but you will.
Chelita-I won't..
Monti-so you do know something.
Andi-Monti just let it go man.
Chelita-I don't need to stand her while you interrogate me like some criminal I'm out.

Chelita was about to walk away when Monti grabbed her by her arm and made her look into his eyes, "What's going on?"

"Nothing damn!" she said and getting loss from Montis grip and walking out of Taco Bell.

Chris-Smooth Monti now she's mad.
Monti-she'll get over it.
Jose-I'm see how she's doing [he said walking after her]


Jose found Chelita outside sitting on the floor with her face resting on her knees.

Jose-Mine if I sit?
Chelita-no, not at all. Sad
Jose-are you okay?
Chelita-no I'm not I hate when Monti gets like this.
Jose-this has happen before.
Chelita-yeah plenty of times, I mean I know he cares but sometimes we make our own mistakes and he needs to let us. I mean I know we've all been threw a lot but I mean we got threw it.
Jose-You been threw some thing to huh?
Chelita-yeah I mean, we messed up back in the day though people where different but I guess some people are just bad.
Jose- What happen with chu?
Chelita-meaning?
Jose- [looked into Chelita's eyes] I mean what's your story?
Chelita-[looking away] I don't want to talk about that.
Jose-don't you trust me?
Chelita-honestly I don't even know you.
Jose-Well how about you give me a chance and let me know you and I let you know me.

He leaned into kiss her but she stood up quickly and looked away.

Jose-What's wrong?
Chelita-I'm sorry but I don't think that's the best idea.
Jose-oh come on give me a chance.
Chelita- Neutral I'd love to pero..
Jose-but nothing.

Jose kissed Chelita softly on the lips when it was intruded by Syd's voice.

Syd-Whoa slow down Sista.
Chelita-jaja Syd where u been?
Carlos-oh we when to the beach.
Chelita-us to but we didn't see you guys?
Syd-oh ha neither did we.
Chelita-I need to talk to you.
Syd-Me too.
Chelita-later.
Syd-Later Very Happy
Chelita-lets go eat I'm starving.
Carlos-me 2.
Jose-me 3.


They walked back into Taco bell and ordered there food and sat with the gang they where all having a nice time Monti hadn't started anything with Carlos, Syd, or Chelita. But that soon became ruin when 2 guys that where very well known to the girls as well as Monti walked in.

"Syd look who just walked in." whispered Chelita in Syd ear.
Syd-Omg! what are they doing here.
Carlos-who what?
Chelita-nothing.
Syd-hey guys how about we get going?
Chris-what's the rush the fun is bearly starting.
Chelita-I agree I'm tired lets goo noow..
Jeca-Is something wrong?
Chelita- nothing we just want to go like now.

But it was to late the guys had seen them and walked toward them with huge smiles on there faces..



[You can write the rest Syd. me tired]


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PostSubject: Re: My FanFic   Sat Aug 09, 2008 5:49 pm

lol
i will write thanks for writing
i loved it!
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PostSubject: Re: My FanFic   Sat Aug 09, 2008 5:52 pm

uhoh... looks like someones going to be in BIG trouble! Love the chapter!!! Can't wait for more!!! DRAMA... DRAMA... DRAMA

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PostSubject: Re: My FanFic   Sat Aug 09, 2008 6:17 pm

aww y does monti have to be so protective!! That's un fair!! Love this chapter!

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PostSubject: Re: My FanFic   Sat Aug 09, 2008 8:37 pm

nooo montis too over protective
he needa chill
and who are those guys that walked in?
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PostSubject: Re: My FanFic   Sat Aug 09, 2008 8:42 pm

o0o and yea im wit emma
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PostSubject: Re: My FanFic   Sat Aug 09, 2008 10:46 pm

Yah I wanna know to! The guys... Hum.. I wonder....

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PostSubject: Re: My FanFic   Thu Aug 21, 2008 10:38 am

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